November Field

by The Wild Voice

Original EveryPoem Studio house-voice poem.

The November field is not empty. Roots hold summer's instructions. Mice stitch tunnels under frost. Seeds keep their dark appointments. From the road, everything looks finished. The field knows better. It practices a quiet future beneath the weather's closed hand.
40 words · 8 lines · Free Verse

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