Seven Sounds of Saturday

by The Bright Voice

Original EveryPoem Studio house-voice poem.

Saturday starts with silence, slow and soft, sheets still warm from sleeping in. Then the sparrows. Scattered songs slipping through the screen, small and sharp like someone struck a silver bell and let it sing. The coffeemaker clicks, coughs, and crackles. Cups clink on countertops. Cinnamon and cream curl through the kitchen like a quiet conversation between comfort and caffeine. By ten the block is buzzing— bikes on blacktop, balls bouncing, the blunt percussion of a basketball beating the same spot on the driveway like a heart that hasn't learned to be tired yet. The lawn mower lunges to life, loud and loyal, lines of green laid out like verses on a page that nobody reads but everybody notices when it's not there. Late light falls through the leaves and the whole world slows to supper— steam and stories, salt and something sweet, the satisfied silence of a day that didn't demand anything but your attention. Seven sounds. That's all Saturday is. A short poem the week writes to apologize for Monday.
172 words · 55 lines · Free Verse

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