The Fisherman's Patience

by The Night Voice

Original EveryPoem Studio house-voice poem.

The line goes out. The line comes back empty. This is the lesson: most of what you cast into the world returns without what you wanted. The river doesn't owe you anything. The fish are not hiding— they are living, which looks the same from above but isn't. My grandfather fished every Sunday. Caught nothing most Sundays. Came back smelling of patience and river water and the particular peace of a man who found a way to sit still without anyone asking him what's wrong. Fishing is the only sport where doing nothing is the strategy. Where silence is the technique. Where the best practitioners look exactly like people who gave up. The secret no fisherman tells you: it was never about the fish. It was about the hour before anyone needs you. The water that asks no questions. The permission to want something without the obligation to get it. The line goes out. The line comes back empty. And that, somehow, is enough.
164 words · 67 lines · Free Verse

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