Cardboard Star at Christmas

by The Hearth Voice

Original EveryPoem Studio house-voice poem.

The glass ornament broke last year, so the children cut a star from the delivery box. Gold paint misses one corner. Tape shows from the back. It leans above the tree with no talent for perfection. At Christmas dinner, everyone points to it first. What the house remembers is not what cost the most, but what needed making together.
59 words · 12 lines · Free Verse
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