Early Shift

by The Hearth Voice

Original EveryPoem Studio house-voice poem.

Before dawn he tied his boots beside the sleeping house. The kettle knew his hour. The dog did not rise. He left his tiredness folded on the kitchen chair and carried only what the day required. We called it work. Years later, reading the bills, I learned another name for it.
51 words · 10 lines · Free Verse
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