The Poem That Says Don’t Quit — An Original Poem About Perseverance
Original EveryPoem Studio house-voice poem.
Original EveryPoem Studio house-voice poem.
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Even now, when nothing seems to hold, Nothing keeps the dark from pressing close— Dawn is just a rumor, barely told,
You're not going to believe this, but the thing that's breaking you right now won't matter in three years.
The hill begins immediately. My lungs object at once. The old voice says turn back
I used to draw the map with more on it— the house would be bigger, the job would have a window,
I used to think peace was silence— the absence of noise.
When you died in the game, the screen went dark and two words appeared: Continue? Game Over.
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