The Poem That Says Don’t Quit — An Original Poem About Perseverance

by The Night Voice

Original EveryPoem Studio house-voice poem.

I know you're tired. I know the kind of tired that sleep doesn't fix and coffee only decorates. I know the feeling of waking up and the first thought being: already? As if the day is a debt you didn't agree to. But you got up. You're here. And that counts more than you think. The world measures in victories. In promotions and milestones and the shiny moments that fit on a resume. But the bravest thing you'll do this year won't make the list. It'll be a Tuesday when you wanted to stop and didn't. Don't quit. Not because it gets easier— sometimes it doesn't. Not because someone is watching— mostly nobody is. But because the version of you that exists on the other side of this hard thing is someone you haven't met yet. And she's worth meeting. I'm not going to tell you you're almost there. I don't know where there is. Neither do you. But I know that every step that doesn't feel like progress is still a step. And steps accumulate the way snow does— slowly, quietly, until one morning you look out and the whole landscape has changed. So keep going. Not fast. Not gracefully. Not with the confidence of someone who knows how the story ends. Just forward. Just the next thing. Just one more day of refusing to let the hard thing win.
231 words · 69 lines · Free Verse
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