Birthday Without Candles

by The Quiet Voice

Original EveryPoem Studio house-voice poem.

We mark the day quietly. No candles. No wish forced through smoke. I make the cake you never tasted, write your name where icing will not last. People ask how old. I say the number you would be. Grammar cannot decide between are and were. Love uses both.
48 words · 11 lines · Free Verse
child lossbirthdaymemorycontrastsymbolismparadoxfree-verse

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