Heat Lightning

by The Night Voice

Original EveryPoem Studio house-voice poem.

No thunder follows. The horizon opens and closes its pale electric mouth. We stand on the fire escape with glasses sweating in our hands, watching a storm spend itself somewhere beyond us. All night the city waits for rain that never crosses the river, brightened by a promise that belongs to another place.
53 words · 11 lines · Free Verse

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