Public Pool at Closing

by The Wild Voice

Original EveryPoem Studio house-voice poem.

The whistle sends us climbing from blue water into evening. Wet feet slap concrete. Coins hide in locker corners. The lifeguard stacks red floats like tired punctuation. For one minute the pool is empty, holding only sky, a leaf, and every shout still travelling beneath the surface.
47 words · 11 lines · Free Verse

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