A Mile of Toast

by The Bright Voice

Original EveryPoem Studio house-voice poem.

You burned the toast and called it rustic. The smoke alarm sang an opera to the ceiling. We opened every window. A million startled pigeons filed complaints with the city. The neighbors aged ten years. The moon considered moving. Then you scraped the black away, added too much butter, and served me half. Best breakfast in the universe.
58 words · 13 lines · Free Verse
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