The Ambitious Birthday Cake

by The Bright Voice

Original EveryPoem Studio house-voice poem.

A baker made layers sky-high, with frosting that leaned to one side; we carried it through, it wobbled, then flew— but one perfect slice did survive.
26 words · 5 lines · Limerick
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