My Daughter Chooses Dessert

by The Bright Voice

Original EveryPoem Studio house-voice poem.

My daughter said cake was too plain, so ordered both tart and champagne; when asked which to share, she guarded her chair and offered one grape with great pain.
29 words · 5 lines · Limerick
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