Birthday Note in Her Lunch

by The Hearth Voice

Original EveryPoem Studio house-voice poem.

Between the apple and the sandwich I fold a yellow square: Happy birthday. Be kind. Come home muddy. Save me one story. At noon she finds it, adds a purple heart, and returns the note inside the empty box.
39 words · 10 lines · Free Verse

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