Candles for an Adult Daughter

by The Hearth Voice

Original EveryPoem Studio house-voice poem.

You light your own candles now, choose the restaurant, bring wine to our table. Still, when everyone begins to sing, I see the serious child who studied flame before making any wish. Blow them out. Keep what you wished for. Tell me what you build.
45 words · 10 lines · Free Verse
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