A Very Practical Wish

by The Bright Voice

Original EveryPoem Studio house-voice poem.

I wished for a year without fuss, with good food and one punctual bus; the candles burned low, so I added, “And snow— but only when none inconvenience us.”
29 words · 5 lines · Limerick
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