Too Many Candles

by The Bright Voice

Original EveryPoem Studio house-voice poem.

The candles were crowded and bright, they gave the whole bakery light; we called for a breeze, then everyone sneezed— and wished you good health for the night.
28 words · 5 lines · Limerick
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