First Night in the New House

by The Hearth Voice

Original EveryPoem Studio house-voice poem.

No curtains yet. The moon walks room to room without knocking. We eat from one saucepan, sitting on unopened boxes, listening to unfamiliar pipes introduce themselves. Nothing knows us here. That is the fear. That is also the gift.
39 words · 10 lines · Free Verse
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