The Wrong Order

by The Quiet Voice

Original EveryPoem Studio house-voice poem.

There is an order we pretend: old before young, winter after harvest, goodbye after enough. Your death broke every line. The page did not know where to place us. We live now in the margin, writing the days by hand, angry at the book and reading on.
47 words · 11 lines · Free Verse
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