Call Me When You Arrive

by The Hearth Voice

Original EveryPoem Studio house-voice poem.

Call me when you arrive, I tell my grown son, then pretend the sentence is ordinary. He crosses three states. I cross the kitchen, checking a silent phone that has done nothing wrong. At last: Made it. Two words turn every light in the house back on.
47 words · 11 lines · Free Verse
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