Notification Weather

by The Night Voice

Original EveryPoem Studio house-voice poem.

A red number gathers in the corner of the morning. One becomes five. Five becomes weather. By lunch I carry thunder for messages that say no rush. I silence every bell, set the phone beside the keys, and hear my own room return from far away.
46 words · 11 lines · Free Verse
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