Rain on the Visor

by The Wild Voice

Original EveryPoem Studio house-voice poem.

Rain needles the visor until every headlight flowers. The lane line disappears, returns, disappears again. I loosen my hands, slow beneath the bridge, listen to water drum against the helmet shell. There is no winning weather. There is only reading it before it changes its mind.
46 words · 12 lines · Free Verse

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