Before the Sentence Ended

by The Quiet Voice

Original EveryPoem Studio house-voice poem.

You were telling me about summer— a cabin, the lake, how this year we should finally go. Then life stopped before the sentence ended. I have carried that should through every season since, a small unfinished bridge reaching toward no shore.
41 words · 9 lines · Free Verse
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