Father Beyond the Metaphor

by The Devotional Voice

Original EveryPoem Studio house-voice poem.

I say Father and bring every human father into the room— the gentle, the absent, the one who tried, the one whose name still hurts. But God is not the enlargement of our best or worst memory. The name points toward relation, source without domination, love that gives without depletion. I speak it carefully, then leave space around the word for healing and correction.
64 words · 15 lines · Free Verse
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