Learning Her Braids

by The Hearth Voice

Original EveryPoem Studio house-voice poem.

He watches the video twice, parts her hair unevenly, starts again. His daughter guards the beads in a purple bowl and reports each crooked row without mercy. By the third Saturday, his fingers know the crossing: over, under, gentle at the roots. She runs to the mirror, turns her head left, then right, and says, almost casually, Daddy, you did it.
61 words · 15 lines · Free Verse
Black fatherhooddaughterhairlearningimageryrepetitiondialoguefree-verse

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